2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(73):My Teachers and Me

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my teacher mrs liu has a great influence on me .she is a science teacher.she has long black hair ,twwo big eyes and a red mouth.her voice is better.she is good at singsing. she works hard on her works .remember her doughter was very ill,instead to go to the hospital to take care of her daughter she still insists on attending class.as we all know,the reacher plays an important role in our daily lifes.so we should respect them