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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
I wasn’t interested in studying because he believed no one cared about me until he met Mr．Thomson, one that I particularly liked and respected in my junior school years． I was doing poorly in mathematics at that time．As a result, I was always feeling down．However, after each test, Mr．Thomson would always announce in class that I had made some progress．Of course, every time I would feel a little embarrassed, and pleased too．And I would make up my mind to work harder in future in order not to disappoint my teacher．So, after one year, I really made amazing progress in that subject．It was Mr．Thomson’s praise that helped me make it．His encouragement changed my life at school and will influence me all my life．I’ve come to realize that I can do anything well as long as I don’t lose heart．
