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句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
nowadays , a wave of fast food seems to sweep over the whole world society.every year,millions of people eat fast food .expecially children and teenager. there are a number of reasons for the increase of eatting fast food in china.firstly,it is convenience and timesaving.either eat in the fast food restaurant or in the home. besides,restaurant have a clean and comfortable environments. many people argue that the cost of fast food is too high and it is good for people ,s healthy. we need to need to also attach greater importance to the nutrition of the fast food.anyway,all pople should be cncouraged to live a happy healthy life
