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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；副词使用偏多。
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, you can either eat it there or take it away. Third, the environment of fast food restaurants is both clean and comfortable. However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value. Fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. It’s good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.
