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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2274
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

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Tax plays an important role in countries’ infrastructure. When asked whether citizens are supposed to pay tax to their government, some people argue that individuals should keep all their salaries rather than pay tax. From my own perspective, as a citizen of a country, individuals are obligated to pay tax to their state. There are many reasons why people need to pay tax. Firstly, paying tax is conducive to a country’s infrastructure. Revenue can bring a great deal of money to a country. Therefore, government can allocate more money on building infrastructure, especially in rural area. Secondly, government is able to use tax on people. In other words, revenue, which is come from people, should absolutely benefit citizens. For example, there goes without saying that parks and zoos are built by our government in order to offer individuals public entertainment. Government uses the revenue to build those public places so that old people can spend their leisure time and youngsters are able to reduce their physical and psychological stress on weekend. Inevitably, on the other side, it is unfair for the poor or low income earners to pay the high rate of tax. The rich is supposed to pay higher rate of tax while the poor should pay lower one. This can make the society more balanced. We may safely draw the conclusion that all individuals have the responsible to pay tax instead of saving all their salaries in the bank since tax has positive effects on not only infrastructure but also benefiting people. But the poor or low income earners should pay low rate of tax.

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