新东方托福高分作:花钱还是攒钱?

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With the rapidly developing society where people hold more various ideas toward the monetary value,money are playing increasingly diverse role in our quotidian life.Subsequently,some people think that we should spend money that we earn,whereas other people,especially the senior,believe that we should still persist in the traditional tenet,i.e."one coin saved is one coin earned".In my opinion,in terms of unconventional standpoint,it is more beneficial if we enjoy our money,and I have three reasons to bolster my stance,about personal life,economic development and social progress. Firstly,financial criteria is not the ultimate destination of peronal life.Although,to some extent,how much money you earn from laborious work,honest business and clever creation,can reflect your ability and status.In the end of our life-long process,we will inevitably find the true meaning-not how much we earn,but how we live.Actually,there is nothing which is comparable with the happiness when we spend time with our friends,family and spouse,etc.So,if we can spend money on more rejoicing affairs which can make us more close to the heavenly welfare,we should enjoy it at the price of meaningless money. Secondly,from the perspective of economics,consumers are the significant driving force behind the improvement of industrial production and agricultural increment.In other words,only after consumers spend their salary on shopping,purchasing service and speculating in the bond market,etc.,will the economic condition start to uplife even to boom.Because,according to most classical economists including Kaul Marx,and Samulson,it is the consumption that fulfills the economic circle. Thirdly,spending money for the sake of the public will bring many more advantages than just saving money in the individual cabinet or depositing in the financial banks.For instance,if we dedicate ourselves into charity organizations,we can help others who are far needier than ourselves.Thus,personally thinking,this kind of philanthropic utility,is the most brilliant methodology of the funding. In conclusion,on the basis of above three reasons,I do believe that it is likely to make the money play crucial functions,if we can correctly harness this magical power.Furthermore,as an adolescent who wants to make contribution for the society,I call for more self-realization.