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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2300
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Water is the sources of one's life , to some extent ,in my opinion ,A better performance in a job interview is also the sources of obtaining a successful job.It's the key factor dertermning wherther you can get a saitisficational job. Absolutely,As we all know ,you can not do better if you neglect this details matters in a job interview: Apperances,your actions,ability,knowledge,confidence,reality and so on. A good looking is a kind of respect to interviewee,with a good looking ,what you say and how you act are much important ,it stands for your whole impression to others .Based on a good begining,you should show your specialized ability and knowledge with confidence to the onterviewee,but doremember not to obey the rules of reality. In a word,when you have prepared all this things mentioned above ,you'll get a nice job .

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