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Living in the digital age, we are unavoidably exposed to the digital products, such as e-books. Believe it or not, we can easily find e-books through the computer. E-books make great influence to our life. Frankly speaking, E-book make us read books more convenient than before. For example, we can find whatever we like reading by searching on the internet without going out our home. What's more, most of the e-books are much cheaper than the paper books. Therefore, more younger prefer reading the e-books. However, having benefited from the e-books, some people are firmly convinced that this new type of books will eventually take the complete possession of book market one day in the future.They worried about the e-books will replace traditional books. From my perspective, it is impossible that the traditional books will be replaced by the e-books. Many people like reading books with their notes on the paper, while, we can't write any on the e-books. In a word, e-book is a great stuff, but it is hard to replace the traditional books. However, at the same time, some effective measures should be taken to prevent the negative effects.
