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Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology, there are an increasing number of e-books come into our lives.E-books make great influence to our life. Frankly speaking, E-book make us read books more convenient than before. For example, we can find whatever we like reading by searching on the internet without going out of our home. What's more, most of the e-books are much cheaper than the paper books. Therefore, more younger prefer reading books via internet. However, having benefited from the e-books, some people are firmly convinced that this new type of books will eventually take the complete possession of book market one day in the future.They worried about the e-books will replace traditional books. From my perspective, I don't think that the traditional books will be replaced by the e-books. Firstly, only paper books can convey us the real joy of reading. Besides, some of us like reading books with notes on the paper, while, we can't write anything on the e-books. Moreover, a good book is worthy of collecting,which will become our important part in our life. In a world, “Whether e-books will replace traditional books” is a question involves considerable discussion. Yet no one can tell exactly what the answer is, except the fact itself in the future.
