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Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology, there are an increasing number of e-books come into our lives.E-books make great influence to our life. Frankly speaking, E-book make us read books more convenient than before. For example, we can find whatever we like reading by searching on the internet. What's more, most of the e-books are much cheaper than the paper books. Therefore, more younger prefer reading books via internet. However, having benefited from the e-books, some people are firmly convinced that this new type of books will eventually take the complete possession of book market one day in the future.They worried about the e-books will replace traditional books. From my perspective, I don't think that the traditional books will be replaced by the e-books. Firstly, only paper books can convey us the real joy of reading. Besides, some of us like reading books with notes on paper, while, we can't write anything on the e-books. Moreover, a good book is worthy of collecting,which will become our important part in our life. In a world, “Whether e-books will replace traditional books” is a question involves considerable discussion. Yet no one can tell exactly what the answer is, except the fact itself in the future.
