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Dear Xiao Wang: I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit me during teh week-long holiday.Come to me as soon as poosible ,I'm waitting for your comming.I 've thought about some good ideas to enjoy our holidays ,would you like to discuss with me? Firstly, I'll shou your around my place to you and how about have a launch in my home tasting my cooking.Secondly,I'll invite some of my childhood friends riding bycicles together to a small mountain for a picnic. But here something I’d like to remind you that you'd better take more clothes for the low temperature in my hometown.Wish you best.I'm waitting for you . Yours sincerely, ZhangYing
