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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear Xiao Wang: I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit me during the week-long holiday.Come to me as soon as possible,I'm waiting for your coming.I 've thought about some good ideas to enjoy our holidays,would you like to discuss with me? Firstly, I'll show my place to you and then how about have a launch in my home tasting my cooking.Secondly,I'll invite some of my childhood friends riding bicycles together to a small mountain for a picnic. But here something I’d like to remind you that you'd better take more clothes for the low temperature in my hometown.Wish you best.I'm waiting for you. Yours sincerely ZhangYing
可可英语 - 划词释义
