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Dear Xiao Wang: I'm so glad to hear that you're going to visit me during the week-long holiday.I 've thought about some good ideas to enjoy our holidays,would you like to discuss with me? Firstly, I'll show my place to you and then how about have a launch in my home tasting my cooking.Secondly,I'll invite some of my childhood friends riding bicycles together to a small mountain for a picnic. But here something I’d like to remind you that you'd better take more clothes for the low temperature in my hometown.Wish you best.I'm waiting for you. Yours sincerely ZhangYing
