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I‘m agree with the point that all this may not make us smart consumers .We should save our money all the time even if there has a sale. When you walking in the street,you can see all kinds of bits and pieces.And when it has a discount table,this moment,you must are eager to have a look thought you want to control youself.Remberring that no pain no gain,so don't have carsh on the things that never will happend.Saving money in your sprea time. Seller are much smarter than comsumers whatever you count.When you go shopping,buyiing the things you needed.That also a right choice.On the other hand,Saving money not mean not speed money.It's mean speeding money in the right place. As far as i'm concerned,money should be put in fair and right place.Of cause,never forget to save money.It'a our traditional qulity in China's culture.
