2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

Along with the popularize of computers,online shpping has become a kind of fashion.But is it totally safe?Let's talk about it next. First,online shopping has a nubmer of advantages.Online shopping is quick and interesting which attracts many people's attention.Owing to the variety of goods,online shopping has replaced with shpoping outside little by little.What's more,online shopping may let us buy someting cheap at a certain time that can save us a lot money. However,every coin has two sides.The products online often have some differents from the real ones which cause us feel upset.Even worse,online shopping also has some risks.The safety of it is uncertain.So there always the money diseapper with no reason. In my point of view,online shopping should be doing at some certain safe websites.The most important is the goverment should publish some laws to protect it from unsafety.