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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I‘m agree with the point that all this may not make us smart consumers. We should save our money all the time even if there has a sale. When you walking in the street,you can see all kinds of bits and pieces.And when you noticed that there has a discount table,this moment,you must want to have a look thought you want to control yourself.Remberring that no pain no gain,so don't have crash on the things that never will happened.Saving money in your spare time. Seller are much smarter than consumers however you count.Then when you go shopping,buying the things you needed.That also a right choice.On the other hand,Saving money not mean not speed money.It's mean speed money in the right place. As far as i'm concerned,money should be put in fair and right place.Of cause,never forget to save money.It'a our traditional quality in China's culture.
