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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Small talk about saving As far as i'm concerned,i think it is a good way to save money in this way.In addition,we can take other ways into consideration to fully save money. Firstly,we should change our attitude towards saving.As you can see,a person's inner idea can direct his or her behaviors.Therefore, a attitude which wants to save money is the most important thing we should to develop at present.Then we can take these thoughts into reality like doing above things.In fact,you can save your money through many detail things such as not wasting any little thing,taking full advantages of all source you have. Last but not least,if you want to save money,any small thing can help you to achieve it.So do it now,if you want.Just do it.
