高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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i used to live in a beautyful small town with green trees all round it , fish swimming in clean river in groups, poor house ,the street is norrow , people work hard but poor. now tall buildings and factorys around every where ,buses and cars running on streets, industry is devolaping ,but environment was pulloted, trees decreesed,fish disappeared, it is imperative to gorven the pollution