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Mr. Johnson, How are you? We received 3,000 prices products of your company on 22th Deb. However, accroding our sighed and it should be 3,500 prices products of thirty-fivth order, we haven't received 500 products yet, pls check the invoice and we look forward to your early reply. best regrads, Haiyang Wang