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Mr. Johnson, How are you? We received 3,000 prices products of your company on December 22ed. However, Accroding our sighed and it should be 3,500 prices products of NO. 35 order, we haven't received the other 500 products yet, pls check the invoice and we look forward to your early reply. best regrads, Haiyang Wang