2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,more and more people have a computer,it look like became a culture .we can't image what the world would be without a computer. On the one hand, Computer is important, for example ,we could search for some informations which is important for us.forthermore,we can conmunicate with others with computer,it's a convenient way to save money, what's more,we know the world without go out.so Computer is useful for us. On the another hand,Computer is harmful for us.Some one can't control themself ,what's they want was just playing computer games,they put so much time on playing that they far away from their friends,their friends leave them one by one,When they notice,they have no friends. So computer like a coin,it has two side,it is good or bad depended on us,We should take good use of Computer.