句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;文中用词稍显贫乏,同时请注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段。
Mr. Johnson, How are you? We received 3,000 prices products from your company on December 22nd. However, Accroding our singhed and it should be 3,500 prices products of NO. 35 order, we haven't received the other 500 products yet, pls check the invoice and we look forward to your early reply. best regrads, Haiyang Wang