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Mr. Johnson, How are you? We received 3,000 prices products from your company on December 22nd. However, Accroding to our sighing of NO.35 order, the umber of products should be 3,500, we haven't received the other 500 products yet, please check the invoice and we are looking forward to your early reply. best regrads, Haiyang Wang