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Mr. Johnson, How are you? We received 3,000 prices products from your company on December 22nd. However, Accroding our sighed and it should be 3,500 prices products of NO. 35 order, we haven't received the other 500 prices products yet, please check the invoice and we are looking forward to your early reply. best regrads, Haiyang Wang