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Dear Mr. Johnson, How are you? We received 3,000 prices products from your company on December 22nd. However, According to our sighing and it should be 3,500 prices products of NO. 35 order, we haven't received the other 500 prices products yet, please check the invoice and we are looking forward to your early reply. Best Regards, Haiyang Wang