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Memo To: Mary Chen From: Li Ming Re: New Year’s Party Date: December 23, 2008 Because I am going to Beijing tomorrow and stay there a week. I can not discuss with everyone about New Year's Party of our company. Now, it's the time for me to discuss with everyone about this party. If you decide on the time and place of it, please let me know the detail. And we are prepare for the party.