2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Along with the popularize of computers,online shopping has become a kind of fashion.Nonetheless is it totally safe?Let's talk about it next. First,online shopping has a number of advantages.Online shopping is quick and interesting which attracts many people's attention.Owing to the variety of goods,online shopping has replaced with shopping outside little by little.What's more,online shopping may let us buy someting cheaper at a certain time that can save us a lot of money. However,every coin has two sides.The products online often have some differences from the real ones which makes us feel upset.Even worse,online shopping also has some risks.The safety of it is uncertain.So there always the money disapper with no reason. In my point of view,online shopping should be doing at some certain reliable websites.The most important is the government should publish some laws to protect it from unsafety.