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作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；可适当增加几条从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
There's no doubt that we have made significant strides in some fields, such as our bustling industry, booming energy, growing economy. While as the same time, we are paying something for this progress, for example the global warm, pollution environment issues. What we should do to achieve a sustainable development society in which our economy and nature will develop simultaneously. Some people are convinced that it is too late to do anything about this problem. There is a saying going on in China-take preventative measures before it is happened. Have you ever seen a movie named ‘Wall E’, if you have, do you remember one of shots that everywhere on the Earth was filled with garbage and there was no plant survive in the ground, no water to drink, no space for human to stand. Do you want to see that scene occurring in our real world, I believe the answer is clear. So do something before everything doesn't come. However, some people hold the different idea for this issue because our world have been polluted, and our climate have been warmer, so we should take some measures to improve this situation. We can plant more trees and classify the rubbishes and recycle them. Of course, these activities are not far from recovering our original home. Everyone should join the team to protect our environment and do something. In my opinion, we should connect the measures above by preventing the further pollution as well as taking measures to improve the polluted environment. A traditional saying goes in China-do not do evil things though they may be insignificant, do not give up good things though they may be minor matters．This sentence is also useful to our activities to protect our environment, do something which seem mineral, such as picking up garbage, saving the water and so on.
