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Dear Mary: I am Li Ming,I not happy.Because i have about seven days business trip to Bei Jing tomorrow.so i can not talk about things that the company New Year's party with colleagues.Plesse tell me the party's time,address when our colleagues have decided. The last,don't forget to tell me what i need prepared.