小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good frend.He's name is wang qun.He has a big mouse and big eyes. he is very kind and he is very frendly! One day, He borrow me for 1RMB.Then he saw:"I will give you this monney as soon". One hour a go,He give me that he borrow for me that 1RMB.