小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Hi my name is Xiaoxuan .This is frend. his name is Xiaowang. He like is bananas .He daes,t like apple . He good at ping_pong .He not good at siemming. He get up at 6:30 .He go to bed at 9:40 .He is 12 . His tephone numbur is 1475698234 . He like Firday. He like play compurter game . I like he . this is myfrend.