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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7189
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Are you living or working a large city? If the answer is yes, what's you feeling living in big cities? Is everything on handy or uncontrolled? I believe that most people will chose the second one-life in big cities makes you breathless. Yes, it is really stressful to work and live in the large. What's the main reason do you think to make you have such a feeling? Firstly, we make sacrifice on our environment as our economy make significant strides. We all know that good life quality is closely related to the good working environment. Secondly, because of the overload job and the air pollution, living with pressure, you have little time to have a rest, and to treat with the courtesy, to make satisfy with customers, many people drink a lot everyday, more and more people will be confronted with the health problem. So many students graduate with a high level degree every year makes limited job positions more competitive. To grab the chance of jobs, everyone works hard in big cities. It is a common sense that people works more than 10 hours everyday for six days a week. All above issues make people who live in big cities stressful. How to deal with these problems, we should protect our environment as we develop our economy. Image that if there is a beautiful place for you to go sightseeing with your families after you have worked for 5 days in the weekend, I am convinced that the pressure will be reduced. And Our companies should provide more and more job positions for young people so that they don't need to work overload and sometimes held a party for employees to relax. No matter when and where, we should be responsible for our bodies. Learning the method to release our pressure. It is not too late before you are ill.

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