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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分50.5分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;请增加词汇量的积累,并仔细检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

The meaning of the comunication In our daily life we need comunication,no matter where you go and what you do. If we have not comunication we may be lost much and can't get anything.And many times we maybe cause much misunderstanding.We need exchange love with our fiends and our parents. We need comunication with others if we want to success.we decide to do a large number of something and make mysesf to do better than others all the times while many times we can't study to communicate with the others.So that we should learn to comumicate with others so as to we can have an advantagy to our success. What's more,if only we want to get firendship and the lovers we need exchange love with the more.Many times we lose much more,only because we have little comunication with others.So,you know we need comunication and it is important to us to speak to others. In the end,in my opinion,we need comunication with as much as people and we can get much happy from it.Now we should do it.

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