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作者学术词汇使用上还有很大提升空间，但拼写错误稍多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
joseph epstein believed that the decisions and the choices made by us forms our destiny, and this is what ambition is about. I totally agree with him. It is exact what we choose and what we decide make ourselves today. Ambition is something which is very abstract. However, with it human beings can do things more confident and cheerful then realize their dreams. People who with less ambition may be hesitated to make decisions, and they are even afraid of making choices. Finally they will be regretful when they look back their whole life. As a saying goes like, a good beginning is half donw. In my point of view, your dream is half realized as soon as you have an ambition and make your own decisions. KFC is well-known to everyone. Some people may wonder what makes it vecome such a famous fast food resturant. The answer is ambition. Many years ago, an old man sold this delicious fried chicken from houses to houses in a cold winter. Although he failed may times, he never gave up for he wanted to make his life become differently. He had an ambition to achieve success. Thanks to his insistant, people around the world can taste this kind of food. A large amount of peple may be confused about life and have a feeling of unsatisfied of themselves. This is because they do not have a accurate aim and ambition. Especially, some freshmen in the university. Some of them might choose to have fun and enjoy their life in the university. And a minority of them decide to bury themselve in working so as to make their expectation become true. Some people may laugh at those hard-working students, and call them book worms. Time flies, when they graduate from school, those who addict to having fun without doing anything valuable may be less competitive, and become regretful. It is their decisions make their future life be in a mess. In addition, most of the undergraduates may find that there are so many certificates that may be useful for us, and it is hard to decide which one should be concentrated on. Asking your ambition. Everyone should have a plan about their futer career. Morever, We'd better think of what we want most. Taking these things into consideration, we can make an appropriate choice. Do not be frightened to make choices, your ambition will lead you to success. In a word, ambition helps us to become a kind of person we want to. What makes us significant is either what we do or we refuse to do. We make choices on our own, and ambition form our distinctive destiny.
