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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Notice on December 25th 2008.The new student of grate one will going to have a autume touring on December 27th. According to the schedule, the touring will include invisit the botanical garden and look the show of "human with nature" before 12 clock. In the afternoon, we are going to YiHe park. The assemble at school gate on December 27th. The joiners can enter name at student's uion before on this tuesday.In the last,Please be on time everybady !
