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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Notice on December 25th 2008.The new student of grate one will going to have a autumn touring on December 27th. According to the schedule, the touring will include visit the botanical garden and watch the show of "human with nature" before 12 clock. In the afternoon, we are going to the Summer Palace. The assemble at school gate on December 27th. The joiners can enter name at student's union before on this tuesday.In the last,Please be on time everybody !
