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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇；从句使用量稍显不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
Notice on December 25th, 2008.The new student of grate one will going to have a autumn touring on December 27th. According to the schedule, the touring will include visit the botanical garden and watch the show of "human with nature" before 12 clock.At noon, we plan to have a picnic in the garden, so we should bring lunch such as bread and furit with yourself. In the afternoon, we are going to the Summer Palace. The assemble at school gate on December 27th. The joiners can enter name at student's union before on this tuesday.In the last,Please be on time everybody !
