2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer,it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time. Just click the mouse,they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers,it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds. They don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However,there are still some defects in online shopping. First,face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second,people will lose the fun of bargain.