2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays excessive packaging has become a problem we have to face.Recently there is an obvious phenomenon that more and more products are packaged excessively.I think the resons are as following.First,most of the goods are aimed at children and teenagers,who care more the goods look like than the goods taste.Second fancy package look more appeal than normal products.Some people think that more beautiful it looks like ,the better quality the product is.In my opinion,it is not a good idea that we pay too much attention on the package.It is the products that count.Excessive packaging cost too much time and resoures,which should be used to improve the quality of the product.My advice is that the package should be simple and green.Considering that some packages are too hard to handl with ,they can use environment friendly materials ,which is cheap and do no harm to the earth.