高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

运用了丰富的复杂句；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

i used to live in a beatiful small town with green trees all around it , the river runing through the town , had clean water in which could seen fish swimming in groups, the house ,however , was simple and crude , people had worked hard but in poverty, the streets was so narrowed ,it wasn't enough to run a car. now , big changes to take placed here , the tall buldinds, department stores and factorys are everywhere ,cars and buses are runing in the streets , but the pollution becoming more and more serious , environment continued to deteriorate , many trees gone , the fish disappeared because dirty water.now our urgent matter is that stop the pollution as soon as possible .