小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend and she is 27 years old now.We are know each other over 10 years.That's a long time to us.At 10 years ago.She had a short hair when I knew her and her's behaveir just like a boy.Every people likes her even some boys wants to make friends with her.After school,we are go home together .And now,she get marriage and will have a baby .