希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend and she is 27 years old now.We are know each other over 10 years.That's a long time to us. At 10 years ago.She had a short hair when I knew her and her's behavior just like a boy.It give me a deep impression. She is so pretty and everyone likes her even some boys wants to make friends with her. She have a long black hair,big eyes,small nose and little mouth.She like sports especially basketball and swimming.She love all the sports competition.