小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend and she is 27 years old now.We are know each other over 10 years.That's a long time to us. At 10 years ago.She had a short hair when I knew her and her's behavior just like a boy.It give me a deep impression. She is so pretty and everyone likes her even some boys wants to make friends with her. She have a long black hair,big eyes,small nose and little mouth.She like basketball and swimming.Especially she like to walking after dinner.It's good for healthy.I wish her could insisit on it.