小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

I have a good friend and she is 27 years old now.We are know each other over 10 years.That's a long time to us. At 10 years ago.She had a short hair when I knew her and her's behavior just like a boy.It give me a deep impression. She is so pretty and everyone likes her even some boys wants to make friends with her. She have a long black hair,big eyes,small nose and little mouth.She like do some exercise. Basketball and swimming is her favorite.Especially she like to walking after dinner.It's good for health, She like singing but she don't good at it.That can not stop her passion.