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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9975
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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This study aims to find out the differences of dining etiquettes of Chinese and British from perspective of intercultural communication. The study has the following objectives (1) to investigate the historical origin of Chinese and British dining etiquettes (2) to compare the differences of dining etiquettes of Chinese and British (3) to explore the cause of differences of dining etiquettes between Chinese and British. Etiquette is a set of customs and rules for polite behavior. It is the foundation of civilization for the whole society. Among all etiquettes, dining etiquettes have been paid more attention by people. On the one hand, with deep development of economic globalization, communication among different countries is becoming more closely linked. In order to avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings in cross-culture communication, it is of great essential for us to know more about dining etiquettes. Only in this way, can we bridge the gap of communication caused by the differences in understanding “dining etiquettes” and succeed in cross- culture communication. On the other hand, China is known as” the nation of etiquettes”. In the west, Britain is also a country which attaches much importance to dining etiquettes. British is the representative of west culture while China is on behalf of east culture. Both of them formed respective dining etiquettes during the long historical process. So it is significant for us to make a comparative study between China and Britain.

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