2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Along with the popularize of computers,.Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technologyNonetheless is it totally safe?Let's talk about it next. Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.First,online shopping has a number of advantages.Online shopping is quick and interesting which attracts many people's attention.Owing to the variety of goods,online shopping has replaced with shopping outside little by little.What's more,online shopping may let us buy someting cheaper at a certain time that can save us a lot of money. However,every coin has two sides.There are still some defects in online shopping.The products online often have some differences from the real ones which makes us feel upset.Even worse,online shopping also has some risks.The safety of it is uncertain.So there always the money disappear with no reason. In my point of view,online shopping should be doing at some reliable websites.The most important is the government should publish some laws to protect it from unsafety