高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；作者词汇表达较灵活，可是有些单词拼错了；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

i lived in a small beautiful town with green trees all aroung it , the river runing through the town , had clean water could be seen wich fish swimming in groups , however , the house were simple and crude , the streets isn't wide enogh to run a car , people has worked hard , but live in poverty. now , big change to take place here , you can see , tall bulidings, department strores , factories are everywhere , cars and buses are runing in broad street. but environment pollution become more and more sedious , because of development of industry, a lot of green trees are gone, fish hasve disappeared because of dirty water.for us , people must do their best to stop polltion