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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9976
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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This study aims to find out the differences of table manners of Chinese and British from perspective of intercultural communication. The study has the following objectives (1) to investigate the historical origin of Chinese and British table manners (2) to compare the differences of table manners of Chinese and British (3) to explore the cause of differences of table manners between Chinese and British. Table manners is the behavior that is considered correct while you are having a meal at a table with other people. It is the basis of social civilization. Around the world, people have different ideas about their table manners. However, with the development of economic globalization, communication among different countries is becoming more closely linked. Therefore it is of great essential for us to know more about table manners. On the one hand, It helps us avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings in cross-culture communication. On the other hand, we can learn from other culture and develop our traditional culture. In addition, China is known as” the nation of etiquettes”. In the west, Britain is also a country which attaches much importance to table manners. British is the representative of west culture while China is on behalf of east culture. Both of them form respective table manners during the long historical process. So it is significant for us to make a comparative study between China and Britain.

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