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Table manners is the behavior that is considered correct while you are having a meal at a table with other people. It is the code that governs social behaviors at the dining table. Social expectations and behavior at the dining table vary among different areas of the world. However, with the development of economic globalization, communication among different countries is becoming more closely linked. Therefore it is of great essential for us to know more about table manners. On the one hand, It helps us avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings in cross-culture communication. On the other hand, we can learn from other culture and develop our traditional culture. In addition, China is known as” the nation of etiquettes”. In the west, Britain is also a country which attaches much importance to table manners. British is the representative of west culture while China is on behalf of east culture. Both of them form respective table manners during the long historical process. So it is significant for us to make a comparative study between China and Britain