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2001年专八英语作文真题:网络对教育的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:04浏览次数:5953
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The Internet is about to take off in China. As many as 9 million people are online, a number that is estimated to hit 20 million by the end of 2000. It is predicted that this phenomenal growth will have great impact on our society and economy. Choose ONE aspect of our society or economy where you think the impact will be most strongly felt, and write an essay of about 300 words entitled.
THE IMPACT OF THE INTERNET ON ...
In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failur e to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
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Table manners is the behavior that is considered correct while you are having a meal at a table with other people. It is the code that governs social behaviors at the dining table. Social expectations and behavior at the dining table vary among different areas of the world. However, with the development of economic globalization, communication among different countries is becoming more closely linked. Therefore it is of great essential for us to know more about table manners. On the one hand, It helps us avoid some unnecessary misunderstandings in cross-culture communication. On the other hand, we can learn from other culture and develop our traditional culture. In addition, China is known as” the nation of etiquettes”. In the west, Britain is also a country which attaches much importance to table manners. British is the representative of west culture while China is on behalf of east culture. Both of them form respective table manners during the long historical process. So it is significant for us to make a comparative study between China and Britain

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