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BE A SOBER PERSON as the saying gone,a wise man never judge something immediately when they heard and saw something.sometimes we might being mistaken,we may make a result after heard and saw something,but never thought it deeply.so we must change the way of thinking.as the following reasons. firstly,it also like a saying :"never judge a book by its cover",if we make a result immediately within deeply deliberate,we could misunderstand someone,so never do it like this,secondly,it may make a flurance on our mind,in the addion,some people think you are a impulsed man。
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